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Thrifty is still a virtue

修正前： In the past，chinawasnotarichcountry.ourseniourslivedasimplelife.theyworkedhardandsavedalot.nowadays， wehavebecomerich.we don’tneedtoworriedaboutfoodorclothes.shouldwecontinuesavingyes.thefoodweatandthethingsweusearethefethefed isaimportantwaytoshowyourrespecttolabourers.agoodlifeisnoteasytocome.itcomesfromeverylaboor’hard working.so， savingisthriftyvirtue.it’sthetaskforeveryone .修改后： Being thrifty is still a virtue (节俭是一种美德).chinausedtobeapoorcountryandpeore untryandplican vea simple life.seniorcitizensworkedhardandsavedalotinmanyways.nowadays，wehavebecomericher.we don’tnedton 不足) foodorclothes.shouldwecontinuethatgoodvirtueofbeingthrifhes thefoodweeatandthethingsweusearethefruitsofotherpeople’slable twaytoshowyourrespecttothelabourer s.besides，with the development of our country，people cunsume， moreandmorenaturalresources.ifwearenotcarefulabout willbeintroubleinthenearfuture.awonderfullifedoesnotcomeasily.itcomesesesily theresourcesontheeeer h. So，beingthriftyisstillavirtue.weshouldcherishwhatwehavenow。